Post by Anteyra on Mar 22, 2009 15:48:23 GMT
Bad Sample:
As you can see the post is very flat, there's nothing in the writing that grab's the reader's attention except for the bad spelling, barely visible gramma and punctuation. There is no description whatsoever.
Apart from that it's a good length, it just doesn't have any "wow" factor to it.
Good Sample
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Tom walked into the coffee shop with a few bucks and his guitar on his back.
"I need some coffee ASAP of im gonna even stay awake in class. Tom put his cash on the counter got his cup and sat at a table sipping on his coffee and tweaked his guitar. After finishing his coffee he walked to school and sat on the stairs and began to play some Rush tunes hoping that someone would notice and offer him a gig of some sorts
"I need some coffee ASAP of im gonna even stay awake in class. Tom put his cash on the counter got his cup and sat at a table sipping on his coffee and tweaked his guitar. After finishing his coffee he walked to school and sat on the stairs and began to play some Rush tunes hoping that someone would notice and offer him a gig of some sorts
As you can see the post is very flat, there's nothing in the writing that grab's the reader's attention except for the bad spelling, barely visible gramma and punctuation. There is no description whatsoever.
Apart from that it's a good length, it just doesn't have any "wow" factor to it.
Good Sample
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